David Donald, his dog Teddy and I on a walk near his house in Wellfleet. |
And, of course, I tried to learn from the master. The excerpt from the interviews below focuses on Donald's approach to writing. It closes with his answer to a question I'm glad I asked: What was your favorite among the stories Lincoln told? The Randall referred to here is James G. Randall, the Lincoln biographer of a previous generation who became Donald's mentor during graduate study at the University of Illinois:
I think
my story-telling style came from being a Southerner where we all talk all the
time and we all tell stories s stories. There is no Southerner
I ever knew who didn’t say, “You know, that reminds me of your Uncle Jim, who
did so and so and so and so,” and the story will go on and on, and somebody
else will pick it up and go, “Yes, and you know, Aunt Mary was kin to him, and
she did thus and thus and thus and so.” And the stories tend to get a little
wilder and wilder with repetition.
My training in
writing came primarily from Professor Randall. He was a brilliant stylist in a
somewhat high academic fashion. I was his research assistant for a number of
years. In his last years he was dictating his writings to me at the typewriter.
So he would be thinking aloud and saying such and such. I was a fast typist,
and I was typing it. He’d say, “I can’t say it that way.” He would parse it
out. “Let’s try it this way . . . and try it this way.” Just hearing him think
aloud about the best way of saying something has stuck with me ever since.
I compose aloud.
Even at the computer, I compose a sentence, and I read it out to myself. If I
can’t read it simply, then nobody else is going to be able to read it. When the
carpenters were working on this addition to my house, I was working in the
other room. I’d compose a couple of sentences and read them aloud and change
them and do it over and over again. The carpenters took a break for coffee and
were sitting under that tree out there. And on one of my breaks, I listened to
them, and one of them said, “Do you think he’s all right?” And the other one
said, “I guess so, you know, but he sits there talking to himself all the
time.” Well, I do talk to myself all the time.
I used to tell
my graduate students that I want you to read your chapter aloud to somebody
else – your roommate, your wife, your partner. You might not have a wife or a
partner for long if you do, but this is the best possible way – if they can’t
be interested, nobody else is going to be interested in it.
When I first
went to work for Professor Randall, in many ways I thought Lincoln would have
been a great bore – an uncouth man telling funny, often kind of dirty stories
and laughing at his own stories. This wouldn’t be a person that I would like at
all. I already had my eye on Charles Sumner, who I would have found much more
compatible intellectually. Over the years I’ve come to realize that Lincoln was
indeed a funny man. Maybe it is just that I have matured and some of the
Lincoln stories I used to hear when I was just beginning in this field that
then seemed pointless now seem to be so very real.
My favorite Lincoln story
he told on himself. It was one of the early Republican conventions – a meeting
of editors. People wondered what he as a politician was doing there. So he got
up and made a self-denigrating speech. “You’re wondering why I’m here. People
often wonder why I’m here. This has been true all my life. I’m reminded of a
story. I was out in the woods cutting trees in Indiana, and a woman came along
riding on horseback and she looked down at me, and she said, ‘My, you are the
ugliest man that I ever saw.’ And he said, ‘Yes, ma’am, but I can’t help it.’
And she said, ‘Well, you could have stayed at home.’ ” .
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